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Jun 18

A breakthrough, epiphany, lightning bolt, whatever… My plot will now continue.

About a month ago, I started a general outline for a new story, completely outside of the Gabriel arc. Got my main character, sketched him out, put together some secondaries, wrote a half dozen sentences outlining where I wanted it to go, and set up a Scrivener project with blank chapters and character cards. I even whipped up a working title and threw together a cover using some not-free images (no, I won’t be using it — that would be wrong — but I will use someone else’s artwork as my internal motivation).

On my Med cruise, I took a few hours over a few lazy days at sea and wrote three chapters that started the story. Some good intrigue, action, things blowing up, the usual. But looking at my outline, I didn’t have that hook…that twist…that “wow” factor laid out ahead of time that I was working towards. I had the story idea, but needed something  unique and “holy &%^$& I didn’t see that coming” inspiring.

Last night, driving home from a friend’s house with my wife asleep in the front seat and my two boys mesmerized by iDevices in the back, it hit me. Figuratively, of course – something hitting me while driving would raise my insurance premiums.

No, the idea hit me, that “wow” I was looking for. A little snippet, innocent and all, from chapter two of what I had written jumped up and said, “use me, use me!”

And so I will. Stay tuned.

About the author

Steve Umstead

Steve Umstead has been the owner of a Caribbean & Mexico travel company for the past ten+ years, but never forgot his lifelong dream of becoming an author. After a successful stab at National Novel Writing Month, he decided to pursue his dream more vigorously…but hasn’t given up the traveling. Steve lives in scenic (tongue-in-cheek) New Jersey with his wife, two kids, and several bookshelves full of other authors’ science fiction novels. Gabriel’s Redemption was his debut novel, published in February of 2011.

4 comments on “A breakthrough, epiphany, lightning bolt, whatever… My plot will now continue.

  1. michaelrwilson on said:

    I had one of those the other night. Getting it ready to e-pub I have been desperate to find the ‘hook’ and make it right. My wife said something and we both stopped and said: Whoah! That’s it!
    It feels great. Tonight I write it up and hope it reads as good as I thunk it!

  2. twistedscifi on said:

    As a fan, this is really exciting news! Congratulations Steve-looking forward to some more great work from you!

  3. Dan Harris on said:

    Gotta love when it clicks. Enjoy the draft.

  4. danniehill on said:

    The hook has landed!

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